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I made this actually when I was getting to sign off MSN, it really late at night, and for some reason i opened a MSN screen and just started typing it stanza by stanza. I copied it into Microsoft Word, and now a couple days later, I am posting it here. I hope it is ok, really I dont know where the insperation came from.

Anyways I can understand that it might be a little off but go ahead and tell me what you think.
©2006-2009 ~DreamlessIdentity
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Give me one more chance to say I'm sorry,
I swear I will never let the tears fall down your red cheeks again,
Let me take you under the dark where the sky is blissful and starry,
Give me the option to hold you until when,
Please let me see you again.

Hopes cant last forever,
But either way I still want to hold and be with you,
Please oh please don't ever say never,
Cause I know deep down inside you know, deep down inside you do,
My dear you are so very clever.

As I watch we drift away so fast,
Soon I wont even be able to reach out my hand and brush my fingers on your arm,
Looking at the photograph it seems like everything is in the past,
And already I am missing your dignified charm,
Now it seems like there is a universe between us that is ever so vast.

Now I sit home alone with the memories flying through my head,
The last kiss you left on my cheek I could still feel,
The last words I remember were the ones you said,
And now I know that those wounds will never heal,
For I feel I could never be happy until we are wed.

It seems so long ago when I held you and you cried,
I took it for granted that I was the one you trusted,
I let the happiness slide,
Now it seems that my heart is rusted,
Because now I know you will never again be by my side.

Alas now I know I will never have you brush against me again in this life,
I gave up my chance,
I must have felt like I had cut you with a knife,
Even I feel like I must have then been forced into a trance,
I regret my moment of strife.

For now you are so far away I could never lay my eyes upon your glimmering face,
I will forever send out all my love to you as I lay here dying,
Knowing that now you are happy wherever you are in space,
You never have to worry about the tears running down your face from me again forcing you to run crying,
Even now you are my angel, one I could never replace.

So as my life drifts away into the shadows beyond I give you my final prayer,
And my angel please always know that the gun was never meant to be aimed at your heart,
When the bullet came out all of the sudden you where there,
That is when they told me you had to depart,
And the last thing I saw was your golden shimmering hair.

Goodnight my starlight angel,
May you be peaceful in your waking dreams,
Use your beauty and grace and cast your spell,
Send away everyone's terrible screams,
Thank you for making me smile, Goodbye Bell.

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opps. i guess i accidently did this backwords

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I sit here alone, remembering memories of better days, turning the pages through a faded photo album...

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